Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have noticed many of the conventions of the genres you have written about so far, in terms of all of the areas we look into, you have also embedded the opening sequence into your blog and set it out in an organised and accessible way. However I would like to see a lot more detail in your work. Use the questions in your booklet as a guide to ensure you cover all the areas that are important, but also make sure you are commenting on conventions of the genre. These are important as it will help you plan your own work.   

At the moment your work is a level 2, in order to improve you should:

• Add detail using the booklet as a guide.
• Go through and check for minor errors (eg the title of your Mission Impossible Analysis)
• Take more screen grabs to illustrate your points
• Discuss whether the elements are typical conventions of the genre.

Well done and keep blogging regularly.