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Research and Planning - 14

Planning and research work is complete and at times detailed. The work is proficient, with elements of excellence. The work into similar products is wide-ranging and detailed and the work into potential target audiences shows promise, although I would have liked to see more work on demographics here. There is some understanding of who the audience is through secondary research and even some primary research. The organisation of actors is excellent, with shot lists, storyboard (that needs updating to reflect the changes made) and props list etc. Overall there is a good level of care in presentation and time management was good.  

Main Task - 43

Excellent care and detail in the mise-en-scene, and also the use of props. The titles are in keeping with the genre and well positioned, care has been taken with choosing fonts etc. On the whole there is a good level of camera control, but on occasions this slipped and there are one of two issues with focus and camera wobble. The opening doesn’t necessarily set up the whole of the film, but it is clearly an opening and does clearly set up the main character and his intentions. 

B-